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Great art, interesting demo. I just wasn't expecting Saleanna to freak out over the mud stain. The way you described her made me think she's a nice girl or at least used to  being dirty since she hunts rabbits. I've no  issues if Ash paled in comparison to Kalen, especially since he was muddied by the pigs, however. It's just that, other than her, her relatives', and her home's fancy appearances, there was no foreshadowing of her reaction. If you're keeping the scene, maybe add something like her thinking about the consequences of a dirty cloak--maybe humans paying less attention to her so she'll be less able to seduce them, or the dangers of not having a cloak ready in case she needs to escape outside (e.g. while it's in the laundry)--to make her reaction more understandable. But it's really up to you, we've only seen a short demo.

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good game i like it than k u

more now get

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I wanna play the new game. Where's the dude who made it? Why is he not responsive? 

He could be a she. 

Wait, that did not make any sense.

Anyway.

Point is...

Why isn't anybody making this game's full version??

I know, right.

Like, bruh. (Or sis.)

Plz.

It looks fucking rad.

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and again,nothing for months.

I love this game already, it's funny too.

Looking forward to the full game <3

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Wooow ! how did you do such an amazing art and game <3 i really like it <3


here is my game :D:D come and see my collections 

https://hana-chan.itch.io/dead-elixir-

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the facebook hasn't been updated since christmas, anyone know if this is still coming out?

I have a mac and it says the file cannot be opened after I extract it :(

any updates :) ?

i want to check it out as well but i need zip file

Fantastic demo :D When are You planning to go with full version?

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I'm really want to play this, but in a future update could you consider making a zip folder of the game for those of us that can't download .rar files?

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7zip extract also .rar

Hey, I liked your demo a lot) When there will be a full game?

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Hey,

there weren't any news from you for a long time. U okay? :)

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I think this isn't ever going to be published right? :/

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The facebook account says that they have been delayed but it is still in progress.

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I love the demo!! The CGs are beautiful and the characters are great. This is going to be an amazing game and I can't wait.

News about release date?
How much does it cost?

I'd like to know about the release date too. Originally, it was planned for mid-august but it seems as if this didn't work out. Their facebook page also didn't update since July and on here there aren't any news either. I'll keep coming here to check about ToS though :)

The demo is really great! I already love Cassius <3 I just have a question: will the full game be free ?

No, it won't be free.

I love the demo!! The CGs are beautiful and the characters are great. This is going to be an amazing game and I can't wait.

The pasteur's gentleness... his brother's clumsiness... the hunter's coldhearted-ness.... 

This demo is heaven of otome-ness xD

Hello!

I am absolutely excited about this game

I can't believe summer is finally here, I hope the countdown to the release starts soon.

Good luck to all of you and thank you for your hardwork so far!

Hi!! I LOVED your demo and I can't wait for the full game!!

I did a playthrough of it here:

https://www.youtube.com/playli...

However, I did notice some grammar mistakes! I am offering to proofread any of the text you want for free! Just let me know (:

Hi Ceirahmoon! 

Thank you so much for your interest and Youtube playthrough! 

Your offer for translation is much appreciated! We are still working on the script at the moment, but we find it inconvenient just to send out short parts (and they might be change at any moment ;A;) . So we decide to ask for proofread when a considerable amount has been written and fixed on. 

We hope you will continue to support us in the future! 

I completely understand (: Thanks for your reply! Work hard! :D

Cant wait for the full game :D >w> Cass seems like a fun route XD

Hi Anira! 

Thank you for your interest in our game! XD 

Cass's route is indeed a funny one. Please stay tune to find out! ;)

Any idea when the release date will be? :x I'm really excited about this~

Hi Arisa~!

Unfortunately we are not set on a release day at the moment. We are aiming for mid-August, but circumstances may arise and change that, because at the moments our team could only afford to do this in our spare time. We will be sure to keep you update once we decide on a date. Thank you so much for your interest though! 

Good luck! 

I hope you can manage. c: If you need any help with proof reading, feel free to ask~ Excited! xD

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Love, love, LOVE the demo! 

The characters were engaging, and the art was gorgeous! The characters' proportions are often off in VNs, but in Saleana the proportions were perfect (did I mention that the characters were mesmerising?). Aside from the occasional grammar mistake and some word choices that seem out of context, the story (at least so far) seems promising. 

Great work! Can't wait for the full game!


P.S. I'm using a mac, and while I couldn't open the file manually, I could open it through the itch.io app. Just thought that this bit of info might help!

Hi jordanyak!

Thank you so much for your helpful compliment!!! (°▽°)/

We are trying to improve our grammar and vocabulary during the writing as well, but it involves a lot of re-read and re-write, which takes longer than expect. 

Thank you for the heads up about the Mac version as well. Since we don't own a Mac (nor any acquaintances do - which is weird, we know, but it happens) we were a bit perplexed as to how to answer inquiries related to it. Your information is very helpful and we will be sure to update it in our game info above.

We hope you will continue to support us!!! (´ ω `♡)

Hello!

I am absolutely excited about this game

I can't believe summer is finally here, I hope the countdown to the release starts soon.

Good luck to all of you and thank you for your hardwork so far!

:D

Hi theffingmonster!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! (〃>_<;〃)

The game would be released during mid-August - still summer but a bit later than planned because exams and RL held us back a bit ;;-;;

We hope you will continue to support us!!! 

Hello!


I CAN'T WAIT

I wish YOU GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAms and I hope all of your efforts will be rewarded!

I will always continue supporting you!!

So far so good! I'm smitten with the artwork! I also wrote in more detail about the demo in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

Hi Bellannmae!

Thank you so much for your helpful review! We will make sure to take in your feedback in the final version. 

The writer agrees that the theme is overdone too, but since it's our first game, approaching it from a familiar position seems safer for us haha. But we are trying our best to refresh this theme, so please look forward to it! 

Thank you again and we hope you will continue to support us in the future!

I just played the demo and I'm looking forward the full version!! I love the music and the drawings and I'm looking forward the story's development! Good luck in finishing your first game!

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Hi Choubadaba!

Thank you for your kind comment! We are happy to hear that you like the demo! 

We will be sure to keep up with the good points and polish the game further. We hope that you will continue to support us in the future!

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Wow, i really loved the demo, even though she was pretty short and the menu isn't at its final state yet, the whole game  seems already so great. I've instantly fallen for the hunter, damn man. 

The artwork is gorgeous and i'm already so excited for the full game to be released, since i'm pretty sure i'll buy it if it still meets my expectations.

But i got a little question, judging from the Main Menu Backgroundpicture, will this Visual Novel only contain Kalen's Route or are there other maincharacter-boys to choose from?

(EDIT: I already read the info about the game, but i didn't get a safe answer from that)

Greetings and keep up the great work,

komae :)

Hi Komae! 

Apologize for the delay answer, we were busy with final exams and real life stuffs and couldn't check the comments sooner.

Thank you for your encouragement, we are glad that you like the game! We will be trying our best to improve the UI/UX design (and of course keep the artwork quality up!)

Yes there will be other characters to choose from (The hunter is one of them haha XD).  Forgive us from saying anything else about the cast, we feel it's a bit of a spoil to say how many you can choose from. We still have a lot to learn from this experience so if this point proved to be a bother, next time we would make sure to state it clearly.

Thank you so much again for your support!  

Hi, when will this be released? I've fallen in love with it!!

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Hello Cswanxx,

Thank you so much for your compliment! If things go well, the full game should be released during Summer this year!

We hope you will continue to support us in the future!

Amazing! Not long before summer comes, :) I loved the demo

when is your summer lol

Hi Sandpixie,

That's a good question actually. Completing is always easier said than done, and we also have to balance other life activities as well.

It should be around mid-August at the latest.  It really depends on how fast we can draw the CGs and write the rest of the script. 

Thank you so much for asking that question though. It's like a whip to our laziness!>_<b

Hello, I cannot seem to play this game. I used Mac. I extracted the game file from the rar, and did what I alway do when I open a VN game but it simply won't open.

Hello PineFresh,

First of all, thank you for taking an interest in our demo and telling us about the issue.
Unfortunately at this moment, we really don't have any solutions for this issue, because we're having troubles finding someone with a Mac and experience with it to help us. We're very, very sorry for this inconvenience.

If we find a solution, we will be sure to let you know. Thank you for your patience!

Try downloading the itch.io software then download the game from there. What the software does is extract and install the game for you. All you have to do is run it from the software itself. See if that helps? Good luck~

Hi will this game also be available on steam?

Hello TheRosetteWolf!
We apologize for the late reply. The game won't be on Steam unfortunately.

Thank you so much for your interest in the game! We hope you will continue your support in the future!

I thoroughly enjoyed the demo and cannot wait for the complete product. Will it be free? Also, I see I am not the only person noticing the grammar issues. If you're looking for a proofreader I am an English Major and wouldn't mind looking over things during my free time.

Hello nortonk94!

Thank you so much for your compliment! It is very unfortunate that some grammar issues are still left unchecked; we will continue to work even more diligently to spot them out!

The final product is not free, but we really hope you and everyone else could look at the price when the game comes out first, and not to dismiss it completely right now.

Thank you again for your support!

full version!! this is epic!!

Hi jaz98!

Thank you very much! We are working on the full version at this moment!

everytime I download it it's not opening why?

Hi ni w17!

We are sorry to hear about that.

Do you mean that you can't extract the download files, or that the game won't open after you extracted it?

Thank you for your patience!

Great Game so far! I am really intrigued an I can't wait to see the whole thing.

Hello MiloEmpress!

Thank you so much for your compliment!

We hope you will continue to support us in the future!

Hello, I just downloaded this game but when I tried to extract it told me to see look for an app to open it help!!!

Hi Mei99!

Do you have Winrar on your computer or a similar program to it, because the game folder was compressed with that program and will need it to extract the download files.

If you do have the program but still couldn't extract the folder, then could you send us a screenshot of the problem?

Thank you so much for your patience.

Love It!! You have my word that I will be downloading the full version!

Hi nialw36!

Thank you so much for your support! We will definitely make the best of our efforts!

I LOVE THIS. I am definitely looking forward to a finished product!

Hi Autumn Fawn!

Thank you so much for your compliment! It gives us strength to strive for the best!

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